Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Monday, 15 June 2020
Pink Crayon
Hey Brody,
Pink Crayon talking here. Hello Mr can you start using me more for other stuff instead of that one small PIG. You could use me to colour in cups, houses, elephants and pink grass. Seriously bro.
Please, I'm sick of you picking me up and dropping me on the GROUND.
Your sad friend,
Pink Crayon.
2 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
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ReplyDeleteHi Brody, I love your ideas. Especially the 'Hello Mr' comment. Can you come and see me in writing time to talk about editing, Miss Pownall
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